Update

Our draft video scored us 10/50 which is a level 1. We did expect this as we weren't completely pleased with our draft and there were many things we wanted to change and plan to do so before we film the final one. Since recieveing our feedback, we have decided to change many aspects of our video. We are re-storyboarding the whole thing to try and create a clearer narrative. Guy will now be playing the lead singer as the teachers thought he would be more convincing and we agreed. Also, we have decided to take the band element out of the video and just have the singer, as done in The Verve's 'Bitter Sweet Symphony' video. We will also be having Scott and Guy in some of the scenes together to try and empahsise that they are the same person, as we were told that this wasn't clear in the draft. If we can, we are going to have Scott in black and white to show that he isn't really there and it is part of a memory. Finally, when we reshoot we will think more carefully about locations and mise en scene and try and have a wider variey of locations to create and keep audience interest. When we have finished our new storyboard we will post it on the blog along with a new animatic.