- first shot is confusing
- lead singer not convincing
- lip synch lacks momentum
- shots not framed well
- end shot is good
- idea not communicated well
- how do we know the boy is the lead singer
- mise en scene doesn't work
- complete rethink
- include more inspiration
Friday, 28 October 2011
Draft Video Feedback
This is the feedback that our teachers gave to us for our draft music video.
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